I heard it
There
A break in your sentence
A brief pause between words
Nothing was spoken
Nothing was heard
And in that utter emptiness
I heard everything
Everything I need to know
Everything you wouldn’t want me to
I heard it
A break
A pause before the end
4 comments:
Very good, poem! Excellent!
A pause. The calm before the storm. IS there hope for frodo? There never was much hope. Only a fools hope. Thats right I know my poems. I am so deep and in tuned with it.
Ok, so hi! you commented after me on morgan's status and i was bored and was facebook stalking you and saw you had a blog so i stumbled over here and started reading and all that to say that I read this and I think it might be one of my favorite things ever. Perhaps it just hit me at the right time or something, but you have a way with words, sir.
Anyway, perhaps you just needed some encouragement. I hope that helped! Keep it up, man.
Haha, stalking is what facebook is meant for. And thank you very much, it seems encouragement has a way of coming at the right time I guess
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